Showing posts with label fiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label fiction. Show all posts

Friday, May 4, 2012

It's time. Can you hear me?

An Irish Traveller in Dublin watches the neigh...
An Irish Traveller in Dublin watches the neighbor kids play from her trailer window. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
It's time to take a break. There is a time for everything, you know. Work. Rest. Relax doing something that has no deadline but gives lots of pleasure. 

I cannot explain it, how I love to read good books so much that I do not want to put them down. Sound familiar to you, too?

Is it lazy to read? Are you kidding? 

Is it a waste of time? Well, ditt-o!

Can you hear me? 

I remember a time one summer when one neighbor slyly criticized another in our townhouse community. We were all parents of young children and the neighbor under critique was about eight months pregnant.

And there she sat on the little front porch of her townhouse that had a pretty little traditional doorway with ivy all around the shrubs and even a leafy tree giving lots of shade, all up a little hill from the rest of us. Almost idyllic in our location. 

"Do you see what she is doing?," said the neighbor I met as we were both going and coming that stifling summer afternoon. "She does that every afternoon. Just sits there." That a woman, even one eight months pregnant, would sit and...well, sit. And in the shade of her porch! Maybe she was even daring to make private observations of flowers around her, or listening to bird calls. Maybe she was thinking through another of her problems. Maybe she was even snoozing behind her sunglasses! (All while listening for waking sounds from two very young progeny taking a nap upstairs.

Who could know?

That's what can be annoying to some people about other people that take the time...sitting, or thinking, or even reading. There are no clues as to what these quiet, contemplative people have going on in their heads when they are "sitting on the porch."

"Isn't it frustrating when they do that?"

All of that neighborhood stuff was another time and place. Late on this Friday afternoon, I am going to stop work and leap into the time, place, and space of a quiet spot to finish the book I was up into the early morning hours with last night. No apologies. And no explanations about the title of this unusual mystery novel, who wrote it, what style they used, or what bag of tricks and misdirections they contrived until they let the answers come out. It's all between my brain and the book.


Hope your weekend has some spaces. It's time.

Yeah!
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Thursday, April 12, 2012

Short Story_The Visitor_ and Identities

I have just finished a second draft of Part III of The Visitor, a short story in three parts. There needs to be another draft, with tweaks for all three parts. Then I will merge the story into one and create a short ebook of it. Having come this far with a first short story draft, shared publicly, I feel no need for the pen name I used at first.

Identity, Religion, and Politics. Three of the most powerful forces to bring people together or to pull people apart. How do we deal with dividers that people use to stir up hate or to show love, to stir up revenge or to show forgiveness? 

The Visitor is a story of identity and all that follows and can influence religion and politics, among others. It is the story of a special friendship that follows generations. The results years later include family memories and differences in next generation members. Elizabeth's mother and Ruth's granddaughter represent on-going matters that crop up unexpectedly. A divide that in modern history looks like an accordion at times, with its widening and narrowing, has touched the lives of Elizabeth's mother in an East coast state and Catherine's family in Atlanta.  
 
If you finished the story, do you know the identity of Catherine and of Elizabeth and her mother? Can you tell? For sure? Imagine it in different ways, from different angles. Could Elizabeth's mother, who was Catherine's grandmother's best friend, and Catherine share an identity that Elizabeth does not share, outwardly? 

Identity characteristics of differences were intentionally not included and should not be assumed from language/syntax or expressions. Also, Catherine is not necessarily a name chosen primarily by parents of any background other than English-speaking, as well as French; the same is true for the name Elizabeth.  

Copyright 2012 by Jean Purcell
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Monday, April 9, 2012

Short Story Editing_THE VISITOR

Short Story Writing Workshop
Short Story Writing Workshop (Photo credit: MadLabUK) Flickr
Jean Purcell
The third and final part of my first short story, in draft, is posted on Opinari Writers now. I hope short story lovers and writers will comment. Be as forthright or blunt with critique as you need to be. Be specific, please. No general comments that do not give me any good feedback I can use. 

Thanks!

The next phase for me is to give some tough editing after I join the three parts as a story draft. Rewriting will happen as part of tough editing.

I'm thinking of trying to shorten the story (in draft it's over 5,000 words). 

Word count for a short story can be anywhere from 500 to 9,000 words, according to general rules. There is no clear cut rule limit, but a very long short story becomes a novella. 

I'd like The Visitor to be about 3,000 words or less. 

You can bet I have no idea yet if that's a do-able goal for me...without taking too much from the story. 

I hope the two main characters, the mother of Elizabeth and the young professional woman, Catherine, will keep your interest. Other characters include Elizabeth, her brothers and their families. In the discussion are Catherine's family as well, by way of some background and information.

I'll update when the next draft, or the final, is ready.

Meanwhile, would you read and comment, briefly or at length? Or, pass it along to someone who might critique/comment? 

I'm determined to keep working at this genre of writing!
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Thursday, March 8, 2012

Story-Writing_Getting Started on The Visitor

by Alec Powers



A few days ago, I finished the opening parts of The Visitor, a short story for Opinari Writers blog. After I promised a second installment, I began to work on it, continuing to write in the voice of an older woman.

The story has an outline. I have main characters, contexts, motivations, story-line, and a mystery behind the bizarre behavior of the visitor. 

Now the challenge takes me toward readers while leaving them in the dark, putting some facts in the light of day. I do not intend to make solving the case too easy.

The main challenges of telling every story, whatever it's about, is building interest and suspense. It turns out that my story involves the Islands, England, Nordic heritage, to mention a few, but the location of the interactions does not change much.

For The Visitor, I don't intend to need shelves of research books. There will be some, but not intensive. I don't want to bog down in details. For now I've committed myself and will go forward.

You likely know what makes a story keep you glued to the pages if the subject can grab you.

Good-bye for now.  

Copyright 2012 by Alec Powers 
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Friday, February 4, 2011

Be Ready to Give Answers

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Whatever we are doing, we need to be ready to describe it succinctly and to tell why we do it, if we enjoy it, why, and if we find it difficult, and why, and other questions that are often part of our own inner dialogue about what's going on in our lives. 

I work with writers, and also I write. It is important to prepare written descriptions and to be ready to answer orally, depending on the inquiring media, whether print, web site and blog information ("about" tabs), and for anyone that interviews you for print, audio, or visual media: 

Be ready to answer key questions. You do not want to have to think as you answer. You want to be ready to remember what your answers really are, before the questions are asked. 

Be ready to give the same or similar answers every time. 

What kind of writing do you do? 
Short answer examples: The genres/categories of your writing-fiction, nonfiction, or personal narrative

Longer answer examples: If fiction/ based on a true story, or romance fiction, or adventure fiction, or historical fiction, or mystery, or children's, for example; if nonfiction, for example: how-to, essays, book (or movie) reviews, op-eds, news (or public interest) columns, biography, general information about...

What is your book about? 
Short answer example: You can choose from the genres above, with a little information: It's a novel about a family/navy,WWII, love and hate....use your information to its best advantage to spark interest.


Expanded answer example: It's a novel about two brothers caught up in a competition that threatens to destroy not only them but their community/corps/secret society....choose the best and most interesting and informative words that best describe the true central theme of the story. 

Another good example: Read the beginning of "'Mumbai Diaries' Review" in Related Articles at the end of this blog post! Notice how the words carefully selected to describe the 'about' flow to create interest.    


How long did it take you to write it? 


Are you working on anything else now? What are you working on now? Answer this kind of question in a way that will spark interest yet will not deflect interest from the present work. Refer back to the last published work and continue on its theme or title.

What helped you the most in the writing of this book (article/series, etc.)? Or, What kind of research did you have to do?


How did the idea come to you, to write about this?

How did the characters come to you, especially the villain? Is he/she modeled on someone you know?
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What do you most enjoy about writing, and why?

What is most challenging for you, as a writer? 


How are sales going? This is a very personal question. If you have a publisher, defer to the publisher, who keeps the numbers. But speak positively about the potential for interest in this book and why people should read it. 

Why should I read this book? Why should anyone read this book? This is your chance to be ready, to answer clearly and concisely. For example: I wrote to tell a story that intrigued me. I wrote to bring the reader into it along with the characters (name two key ones, perhaps), and to keep the pages turning with increased interest.


Most of all, take your time, having prepared in advance with answers that are accurate, interesting, and, perhaps, entertaining. Be ready to open yourself up without being wordy and without faltering. You should not have that shocked expression, as if you had never thought about the questions you might get. 


Every interview, every summary you write, and every mission statement or book/article description you do for yourself will help prepare you for these moments. Opportunities may come at unexpected times, when a stranger in a group after a meeting or at a get together will ask similar questions of interest. 

Be true, be interesting, and be ready!

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Thursday, November 4, 2010

Christian Authors, Different Stories, Draw Together to Help

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A Lever Long Enough Fiction writer Amy Deardon is the author of A Lever Long Enough and she wrote: "I recently joined the John 3:16 Network," a marketing network put together by Lorilyn Roberts..."I am pleased to announce the book launch of KNOWING GOD by one of the John 3:16 members, Sana Edoja."
Knowing God (Volume 0)
Author Sana Edoja was born in France of French and Moroccan parents. In 1995, she moved to the UK to improve her English. "Struggling to make a living while in the UK, my life turned around when I believed and was baptized into Christ Jesus, confessing Him as my Lord and Saviour. I saw the power of God at work in my life. It was this experience that motivated me to write my first book “Knowing God”, which I believe will help those who are seeking God to get a better understanding of the riches of the Kingdom of God."

Tuesday, September 28, 2010

What's Your Genre?

You're writing something. Is it a book, play, film script? What is the genre, or category?
Choose from the list below.  You can have more than one; for example, the book Les Miserables is fiction/history.
Genre takes into account subject matter/topic and audience